First off, I’d like to say that you guys have compiled a nice project. I have only a few suggestions.

1. In your course goals section, consider restating the goals in more goal-oriented language. (For example, in #1 you could write: “Instill within students a stronger understanding….) Also consider adding a research component goal.

2. Be sure to fill in your list of committed participants. The copy I have is blank.

3. For your anticipated expenses, I would strongly recommend itemizing your expenses in column format and showing a bottom total. This is typically what review committees want to see.

4. Lastly, if you have any statements of merit that you can add to your “Explanation of Transdisciplinary Nature” section I would put them in. Given that this is the bread and butter of the whole T-course initiative, I would not hold back any of your insights.

If you have any further questions, feel free to e-mail me (tyler.reeb@cgu.edu) or meet Tom and I at Hagleburger’s this Wednesday from 3 p.m. to 4 p.m.

Once again, nice work.

Cheers,

Tyler